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Miss Luo is our Engilsh''s teacher,she is university student.she is quivet but she is strict.Miss Yu is our Chinese''s teacher,she is kind.Miss Tu is our math''s teacher,she is tall and thin.she active but she is vevy strict.Mr Xu is our principal,he is tall and strong,he is vevy funny.名师点评:小作者这篇英文作文写得比较不错,文章介绍了小作者班级的几位老师,有英语老师、语文老师和数学老师等。小作者还介绍了他们外形上和性格上的一些特点。文章中心明确,句子也基本通顺,只是有些笔误,小作者要改正。“she is university student”改为“she is an university student”。“quivet”改为“quiet”。“vevy”改为“very”。(学乐中国特聘教师:王运连老师)2009-11-29 16:15:00

our teachers